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TWN | B1_2 | 9 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 6 | 5 | 73 | 73 | 73 | The essay had strong arguments with well organized
structure, which helped the essay flow smoothly | There were minor mistakes in using vocabularies.
Also, there were not full sentences in writing the
essay | 19,412 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
JPN | B2_0 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 88 | 88 | 88 | The essay had a good structure with complex and
compound sentences | There were only minor mistakes in using grammar
such as careless mistakes | 19,355 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
IDN | B1_1 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 8 | 5 | 2 | 1 | 5 | 2 | 41 | 41 | 41 | The student could write simple sentences quite well. Also,
the student likely put mush effort to write complex
sentences | Writing incorrect complex sentences might lead
to confusion of the contents in the essay | 19,425 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
PHL | B2_0 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 67 | 67 | 67 | The essay comprised good explanations which help
the essay have clear contents | There was the use of incorrect vocabularies which
might cause difficulty for understanding | 19,376 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
SIN | B2_0 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 2 | 4 | 2 | 41 | 41 | 41 | The student could write simple sentences and give quite
good explanations in the essay. | The essay tended to have weak arguments and
the student made mistakes in using vocabularies,
which may affect the contents in the essay. | 19,459 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
TWN | B2_0 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 7 | 86 | 86 | 86 | The essay had strong arguments with great
justifications which are very convincing | There was the incorrect use of conjunction and
vocabularies in this essay | 19,383 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
CHN | B2_0 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 59 | 59 | 59 | There were good reasons in supporting arguments.
Also, there was the use of compound and complex
sentences
| There were incorrect use of vocabularies and
conjunctions. The student tended to go round
before going to the points | 19,407 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
TWN | B2_0 | 9 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 74 | 74 | 74 | In this essay, the student gave strong arguments with
great justifications | A topic sentence was given without clarifications.
Also, there was minor incorrect mistakes in using
vocabularies | 19,435 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
TWN | B1_2 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 2 | 4 | 4 | 39 | 39 | 39 | There was the use of simple sentences and good
explanations for arguments | The essay did not meet purpose of tasks of the essay. Also, there was
the use of incorrect vocabularies | 19,333 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
KOR | A2_0 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 42 | 42 | 42 | The student showed good reasons for working part time
in the essay | Wrong use of vocabularies created difficulty for
readers to understand the context of the essay. | 19,452 | I agree with the preceding statement ecause I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for . First, They should buy as many as books and read them. The study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read many books, but they forbidden writing in the books. I think writing in books studying is very important. Therefore, college students need money to buy a lot of books. Second, need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. the club activities, they will need money. If they friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. summer vacation, they will plan to a trip overseas. I think college students need to study and play. A part-time job them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. the very precious things working in society, and various things. For example, they the importance responsible for work and difficulty money. I think college students should have part-time job and study a things. | I agree with the preceding statement. Because, I think that college students need a lot of money. I have two reasons for it. First, They should buy as many as books and read them. They can study a lot of things from the many books. If they go to the library, they can read the many books, but they are forbidden writing in the books of library. I think writing in the books for studying is very important. Therefore, college students need much money to buy a lot of books. Second, they need to make many friends. To make a friend, they will belong to a club. On the club activities, they will need much money. If they get friend, they enjoy eating and drinking with their friends. In summer vacation, they will plan to have a trip in overseas. I think college students need to studying and playing. A part-time job gives them not only the money but also the wonderful experiences. It is the very precious things that working in the society, and finding the various things. For example, they feel the importance for responsible for them work and difficulty with getting a money. I think college students should have a part-time job, and study a lot of things. |
CHN | B2_0 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 7 | 79 | 79 | 79 | 1. Writer was followed by structure, there was reason for supporting details and also good concluded. | 1. Grammar may be improved by simple tense and linking words. | 19,587 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
JPN | B1_1 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 61 | 61 | 61 | 1. Writer was followed by structure, there was reason for supporting details and also good concluded. | 1. Grammar may be improved by wording choices and used complex sentences. | 19,576 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
THA | B1_2 | 3 | 4 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 28 | 28 | 28 | 1. Writer gave good ideas for supporting essay, there has example and gave own ideas in the conclusion | 1. Writer was not followed by the structure, there has not strong reason enough for supporting details | 19,550 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
HKG | B2_0 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 86 | 86 | 86 | 1. There was followed by the structure and it was specific point facts in the essay. | 1. Writer was improved grammar by wording choices and used 12 verb tense | 19,569 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
CHN | B1_1 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 86 | 86 | 86 | 1. Writer was followed by the structure and good point of view in the beginning, there was reason for supporting details | 1. There was not gave example for supporting details and grammar may be improved | 19,514 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
CHN | B2_0 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 30 | 30 | 30 | 1.Writer gave good overview in the beginning and there has linking word to connected the ideas. | 1. Writer was not followed by structure and there has not strong reason for supporting details. | 19,563 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
CHN | B2_0 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 53 | 53 | 53 | 1. the writer was not followed by the structure, There were reason and example for supporting details and used the contrast view | 1. Grammar may be improved by make a short sentences and word choices | 19,504 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
PHL | B2_0 | 2 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 26 | 26 | 26 | 1. Writer gave good ideas for supporting essay, and there has facts for supporting details. | 1. Writer was not followed by the structure, there has not strong reason and example for supporting details | 19,549 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
IDN | A2_0 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 75 | 75 | 75 | 1. Writer gave comparison view for supporting ideas and Conclusion gave good view | 1. there was not followed by the structure , it lacked of example for supporting details and grammar may be improved | 19,529 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
IDN | B1_2 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 88 | 88 | 88 | 1. Writer gave reason by contrasting views in the essay and point of view in the beginning | 1. Writer was not followed by the structure, grammar may be improved by complex sentences and conclusion should has facts. | 19,464 | Why many college students decide to a part-time job they learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work part-time job because of their famil credit, while others part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have part-time job First of all, students have part-time job can some money to share the work and they can develop many skills to becom good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain experience from older workers. Most importantly, when college students graduate and want to find a job students who had part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other not. Especially students a lot of -time jobs many years, proof of diligence. However, there are some students who part-time job to learn campus. They must that the reason they are students is to learn to find good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that a part-time job while learning can any problems if use their time . In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step the key success. | Why many college students decide to do a part-time job although they can only learning and use their free time to rest. Some student must work a part-time job because of their family credit, while others do a part-time job because they want to. Personally, I think it's important for college students to have a part-time job First of all, the students that have a part-time job can get some money to share the work of their family and they can develop many important skills to become a good worker, such as responsibility, punctuality and self-command. They also learn how to work with other people and gain many experience from older workers. Most importantly, when the college students graduate and want to find a job. The students who had a part-time job in the past are more interesting than the other whom not. Especially, the students that did a lot of past-time jobs for many years, it's a proof of diligence of them. However, there are some students who do a part-time job brush away to learn in campus. They must to memorize that the reason why they are students is to learn to find a good work in the future. In my opinion, I don't think that do a part-time job while learning can make any problems if they use their time worthily. In conclusion, I think that a part-time job is the first step to the key of success. |
PHL | B2_0 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 30 | 30 | 30 | The author distinguishes between useful facts and claims that require more explanation or investigation. | The author displayed a minimal comprehension of the issue, only scratching the surface of the objectives. | 19,637 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
IDN | B1_2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 45 | 41 | 43 | The essay begins with a subject phrase and continues with three or more detail sentences that tie back to the primary point. | There are particular examples of large or many grammatical faults, including as issues with articles, verb tenses, subject/verb agreement, contractions, and idioms. | 19,665 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
CHN | B1_2 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 63 | 63 | 63 | The author identifies the value involved in the topic in questioning the issue. | The writer failed to perceive the problem or difficulty in a broader context or perspective. | 19,622 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
THA | B1_1 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 65 | 65 | 65 | The author attempted tone and language use were effective for the overall integrity of the text | The author has no clear introduction of the main topic or structure of the essay which may have problematic arguments. | 19,696 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
KOR | B1_1 | 5 | 4 | 2 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 7 | 27 | 35 | 31 | The essay defends important points of view and provides assumptions and reasons for opposing the primary topic. | There are certain flaws with the work that may be resolved if the writer employed suitable transitional elements. | 19,658 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
TWN | B2_0 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 45 | 44 | 44.5 | The majority of the essay is clear, focused, and well-detailed, however there may be a few parts that need to be improved. | There are several linguistic faults, and the one redeeming grace is that, despite all of the errors, the writer appears to have made an honest effort. | 19,659 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
JPN | B1_2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 82 | 47 | 64.5 | The essay has a topic sentence with three or more supporting detail sentences that relate back to the main idea. In addition specific examples are given | The are major or multiple grammar errors; specifically, problems with articles, verb tenses, subject/verb agreement and contractions and idioms | 19,676 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
JPN | B2_0 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 45 | 35 | 40 | The writer clearly states and addresses a given issue in a vivid manner. | The writer simply engages the audience in a few occasions throughout the work and uses language with minimal expertise. | 19,635 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
TWN | B1_1 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 2 | 5 | 2 | 5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 33 | 33 | 33 | The writer has a fluent and articulate relation of ideas which are effective, powerful tone, and proper language use | The text's conclusion is recognizable, but does not tie up all loose ends. | 19,694 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
TWN | B2_0 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 32 | 32 | 32 | The inquiry and generalizations are interconnected, making the work powerful in several essential areas that the writer proposes. | The writer frequently maintains or defends opinions based on self-interest or prejudices, but without balancing viewpoint. | 19,646 | I agree that it is important for college students to have part-time job. There are several reasons. First, can earn money own. we grow up, the entire bill studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters college at the age of eighteen. ighteen years old means an adult. You should share the economic load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can experience. experience will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. , your primary goal is get good grade pass the exam don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced you will regret in the future. | I agree that it is important for college students to have a part-time job. There are several reasons. First, you can earn money in your own. When we grow up, the entire bill about studying was paid by our parents. Usually one enters the college at the age of eighteen. Eighteen years old means you are an adult. You should share the economical load of your family. You can use the money to pay for your registration and learn to be independent. Second, you can learn how to deal with problems encountered in your work. When you solve these problems, you can get experiences. Those experiences will one day help you when you graduate from school. Last, you can make friends from your work. A good friend will be help of you future work, especially when you are in trouble. He can save you when you need help. But as a student, your primary goal is get good grade to pass the exam. So don't spend too much time at part-time job. You need time to study and go to class. Try to distribute your time among class, part-time job, playing and rest! Those things must be balanced. Or you will be regret in the future. |
THA | B1_1 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 26 | 26 | 26 | Good points were established to support the opinion | Repetitive use of words like "part-time job" in every consecutive sentence is not suggested. | 19,873 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
CHN | B1_2 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 75 | 75 | 75 | Simple yet accurate points were discussed. | Some statements lack of correct prepositions. | 19,782 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
CHN | B1_1 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 87 | 87 | 87 | Almost perfect sentence structure. | The use of correct punctuation marks could be improved. | 19,865 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
CHN | B1_1 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 5 | 74 | 74 | 74 | Simple yet direct to the point ideas. | Adjective and adverbs could be improved. | 19,787 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
SIN | B2_0 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 40 | 40 | 40 | Vocabulary and choice of words are good. | Present-perfect tenses and use of singular/plural verbs could be all improved. | 19,833 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
THA | A2_0 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 30 | 30 | 30 | Realistic examples were provided. | Punctuation and grammar structure could be improved. | 19,828 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
THA | B2_0 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 44 | 44 | 44 | Realistic ideas were given to support the opinion. | Repetitive use of certain words in corresponding sentences could be improved (e.g., valuable, thinking). | 19,823 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
THA | B1_2 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 34 | 34 | 34 | Direct to the point ideas. | Repetitive use of "part-time job" and "scholarship". The grammar structure could be improved. | 19,830 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
IDN | B1_2 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 40 | 40 | 40 | Good usage of adjectives. | Use of singular and plural verbs could be improved. | 19,826 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
KOR | B1_2 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 48 | 48 | 48 | Good examples were given. | There were poor word choices and sentence structures. | 19,750 | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts the next day. will have negative effects on studying: won't concentrate, and they will even be to doze in class. , it will impact their grades. Finally, if a student works parttime, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on work, he can't enjoy his life. I think that period students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students duty is studying. have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs some negative effects above. period of students is a time to study. | These days, a lot of students have part-time jobs. On the Internet and newspapers, many companies are looking for students to work for them. I don't think, however, it is a good idea for students to work part-time while they are going to school. I also don't think it is necessary, because parents support them and pay for their expenses. In addition, having jobs has some negative effects. First of all, education is difficult and complex. To learn and get good grades, students have to study hard. They have to get up early to attend classes, and do their homework at home. It seems to be easy, but it is busy and hard. If students are working part-time after class, they are going to be tired, so it impacts on the next day. It will have negative effects on studying: they won't concentrate, and they will even be able to doze in class. Finally, it will impact on their grades. Finally, if a student works part-time, he may miss out on the fun of his life. He won't be able to play with his friends and enjoy his own spare time. In other words, if a student spends time on working, he can't enjoy his life. I think that a period of students is the freest time except studying. This is because their parents pay for their expenses, and parents help everything that they want. Therefore, students have to concentrate on studying. In conclusion, students' duty is studying. They have to study rather than work because having part-time jobs has some negative effects as above. A period of students is a favorable time to study. |
THA | A2_0 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 39 | 40 | 39.5 | The statement was supported by strong examples. | Some mistakes could be fixed and it could be longer for a better essay. | 19,987 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
ENS | ENS | 9 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 81 | 81 | 81 | It was impressive and the personal experience added a practical view in this essay. | It could be detailed with the explanation of importance of part time jobs from all other aspects. | 20,000 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
SIN | B2_0 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 79 | 72 | 75.5 | The essay was good and impressive. | It was not determined about the opinion, student tried to create a diplomatic answer. | 19,979 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
PAK | B2_0 | 3 | 3 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 23 | 24 | 23.5 | The writer compared the idea of part time job with western cultures which is much different than Asian mindset. | Spelling and grammatical errors had weakened the narrative. | 19,932 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
CHN | B1_1 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 71 | 69 | 70 | The idea was unique and it was perfectly written. | More advanced words could be used. | 19,927 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
IDN | B1_2 | 4 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 59 | 44 | 51.5 | The importance of having a part time job was explained to the point. | It was based on just a general idea, depth knowledge would be better. | 19,966 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
KOR | A2_0 | 2 | 1 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 1 | 27 | 21 | 24 | Personal experience that added here made it more strong. | Grammatical knowledge needed to be improved. | 20,011 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
THA | A2_0 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 3 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 55 | 47 | 51 | The reasonings were explained step by step. | Grammatical knowledge needed to be improved. | 19,994 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
PHL | B2_0 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 85 | 68 | 76.5 | It was a beautifully explained essay. | It was a little bit of short than usual. | 19,936 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
THA | B1_1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 1 | 12 | 14 | 13 | The essay was simple. | It was not organized, lack of grammatical sense, misspelling, logics were unrelated and not purposeful. | 19,976 | I feel it is important for college students to have parttime job mportant or important is according to economy situation, ambitions, and many other reasons. If their parent maybe it is not important because can all of the college and books. But are or middle sometimes need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students have parttime job to fulfill their ambitions to be a , but I think study is more important for college students than a parttime job. ecause the smarter are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course will ready to better job be more serious than before because they not need to split their concentration their part time job and study time. For students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for college cost, books, and transportation. some students do noy take parttime job seriously. | I feel it is important for college students to have a part time job Important or not important is according to their economy situation, ambitions, and many others reasons. If their parent rich maybe it is not too important because they can paid all of the college cost, and books. But if they are a poor family or middle maybe sometimes they need to do a part time job to add their income, or maybe they want something more. Some college students sometimes have a part time job to fulfill their ambitions to be a richer man, but I think study is more important for college students than doing a part time job. Because the smarter they are the faster they will finish their course, and they will save more money because they not repeat their course, they will ready to face a better job, be more serious than before because they do not need to split their concentration with their part time job and study time. For poor students of course a part time job is important because they need more money to pay for the college cost, for their books, and their transportation. Generally some students do noy take a part time job seriously. |
IDN | B1_2 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 75 | 75 | 75 | Well constructed text leading to a forcefully argued point of view | No points of reference to reinforce the single point of view taken | 20,024 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
CHN | B1_1 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 73 | 73 | 73 | The text flows nicely, the descriptions are presented accurately and the grammar is near perfect. | The text sometimes turns back on itself in an illogical way | 20,145 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
TWN | B1_2 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 70 | 70 | 70 | Nicely written with plenty of worthwhile content and some asides | The asides wasted precious lines of text diminishing the effectiveness of the essay | 20,112 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
CHN | B1_2 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 73 | 73 | 73 | Very well written, almost perfect grammar and nearly completely understandable | Slightly let down by the imperfect grammar which in turn ripples the fluency | 20,054 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
THA | B1_2 | 3 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 15 | 15 | 15 | There are not any good points to be raised | So badly written in all aspects. Lacks any attempt at being made in any way understandable | 20,102 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
SIN | B2_0 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 88 | 88 | 88 | Perfect prose, full of everyday English, guided us through all the arguments well | It is almost a perfect essay. There are not specific weak points | 20,113 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
CHN | B2_0 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 52 | 52 | 52 | Good composition following a reasonably straight direction from start to finish | Poor grammar makes the overall story a lot less easily understood | 20,147 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
THA | B1_1 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 51 | 51 | 51 | It is made clear from where the point of view is taken | The overall effort lacks a steady, defined path and goes nowhere | 20,082 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
ENS | ENS | 8 | 5 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 2 | 7 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 58 | 58 | 58 | Perfect grammar, strong and wide vocabulary and a very easy to understand overall good impression | Not enough insight into the reality of a students life | 20,037 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
CHN | B1_2 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 74 | 74 | 74 | Beautifully written, really comprehensive insights and well expressed opinions and views | A slight tendency towards sitting on the fence rather than take a stand | 20,042 | Its not. it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then theyregurgitate of these boring old wives tales character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of . is quite simply a casebycase really and that's all it is. Those need extra for university college fees, books, party cash or living expenses work part-time jobs and those who are do. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If want work experience, then they choose to work in a careerrelated company during the holidays. I honestly understand what all the is about when about character building either. I mean, if I want character then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the eriod! | It's not. But it never ceases to amaze me how many ordinary people believe that it is and then they regurgitate an awful lot of these boring old wives tales like; character building, responsibility, work experience etc. What a load of bollocks. It is quite simply a case by case scenario really and that's all it is. Those that need a few extra quid for university fees, college fees, books, party cash or living expenses, work part-time jobs and those who are cashed up, don't. That's it in a nutshell really and end of story. If they just want work experience, then they choose to work in a career related company during the holidays. I honestly can't understand what all the kerfuffel is about when they rave on about character building either. I mean, if I want character building, then I'll join the military or a religious sect. I am not going to build much character stacking shelves in the evenings or delivering newspapers at 4AM in the morning when I should be sleeping, studying or both. Where I come from, if I was in a job interview and told the interviewer that I delivered newspapers in the mornings they would probably say, straight off the bat, "Oh I see, no cash hey?" It's not important to have a part-time job at all for college purposes unless you need the cash. Period! |
CHN | B1_1 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 80 | 76 | 78 | The text is very engaging with the audience. The ideas are logical and creative. | The text is short, there could be more explanation and ideas. | 20,207 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
CHN | B1_1 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 50 | 49 | 49.5 | The author asks questions and engages the audience using second person pronoun. | The sentence structure affect the appeal of the text. | 20,282 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
JPN | B1_1 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 35 | 43 | 39 | The text is presented in a somewhat organized manner with supporting details. | Several sentences are not structured correctly. | 20,276 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
CHN | B2_0 | 3 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 4 | 35 | 42 | 38.5 | There are creative thoughts supporting the main idea. | Some sentence structures affect the appeal of the text. | 20,247 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
IDN | B1_2 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 5 | 2 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 35 | 41 | 38 | There are several ideas pointed out. | The disfluency and inaccuracy make it very hard to follow. | 20,164 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
KOR | B2_0 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 3 | 30 | 37 | 33.5 | There is a sequence of ideas to support the point of view. | The disfluency and inaccuracy make it very hard to follow. | 20,166 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
PHL | B2_0 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 65 | 62 | 63.5 | There is a creative comparison to illustrate the author's point of view. | There are some spelling errors that affect the appeal of the text. | 20,249 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
CHN | B1_1 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 60 | 60 | 60 | The meaning could be obtained from the text. | Some grammatical mistakes affect the appeal of the text. | 20,244 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
KOR | B1_1 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 70 | 66 | 68 | The text is presented in good structure with supporting thoughts. | The text does not engage with the audience so much. | 20,224 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
IDN | B1_2 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 2 | 5 | 45 | 47 | 46 | The writer is creative with the supporting details. | The text should include more facts to support its ideas. | 20,217 | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a part-time job, and will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a service banquet. Through this job I notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciat my parents because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't a part-time job, I would never such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. in my opinion, college students should have part-time job. Second, having part-time job a of information about occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can what of jobs they really want to do in the future. I that having a part-time job happy lives for college students. Third, I think students to have part-time job and earn money by because college students need money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of. They should try to independent from their parents they work in order to earn the money they need. In conclusion, these three reasons, I believe that having part-time job is important for college students. | I agree with this statement, and I think that college students should have a part-time job. I have three reasons for this. First, they can learn a lot trough having a part-time job, and it will be useful in their future. For example, I worked at a Hotel as a service stuff in banquet. Through this job I could notice that it is not easy to earn money, and I felt appreciate to my parents, because they have worked for me since I was born. If I hadn't have a part-time job, I would never get such a feeling. This is one lesson from my working experience, but I believe every college student can learn something important through doing a job. So in my opinion, college students should have a part-time job. Second, having a part-time job gives them a lot of information about the occupation. Then if they have a several kinds of jobs in their university days, they can know what kind of jobs they really want to do in the future. I mean that having a part-time job brings happy lives for college students. Third, I think students have to have a part-time job, and earn money by their selves, because college students need a lot of money for trip, study, or play with their friends. However, they should not make their parents pay all of them. They should try to independent from their parents. So, they have to work in order to earn the money that they need. In conclusion, from these three reasons, I believe that having a part-time job is important for college students. |
TWN | B1_2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 90 | 90 | 90 | The ideas are clear and well explain, the sentences are well organized | The conclude sentence should be added | 20,392 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
KOR | B1_2 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 65 | 59 | 62 | There are good supporting ideas | There are some grammatical errors | 20,310 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
THA | B1_2 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 35 | 33 | 34 | The ideas are logical | The sentences are not arranged well, there are some grammatical errors such as using punctuation and capitalize incorrectly | 20,382 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
CHN | B1_1 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 75 | 77 | 76 | The supporting ideas are well explained with logical ideas | There are some grammatical errors such as using punctuation | 20,384 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
IDN | B1_2 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 40 | 41 | 40.5 | Provide logical ideas | The structure is not well organized, use same connector many times | 20,365 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
CHN | B1_2 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 40 | 40 | 40 | Some ideas are understandable | Some sentences are confused | 20,322 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
IDN | B1_1 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 35 | 31 | 33 | The ideas are clear with supporting sentences | There are some grammatical errors such as verb tense, capitalize using, some sentences are duplicated | 20,405 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
TWN | B1_2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 90 | 88.5 | 89.25 | The sentence structures and supporting ideas are well arranged | nan | 20,324 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
IDN | B1_1 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 42 | 46 | 44 | Good conclude sentence | There are some grammatical errors | 20,309 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
CHN | B2_0 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 90 | 90 | 90 | There are good supporting ideas to the proposed idea, using connector appropriately, good open and conclude sentences | There is a tiny grammatical error | 20,403 | I think that college students have part-time before graduating from university. ecause they didn't have any experience part-time job, they embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a freshman, I worked Lotto Riau as a parttime worker for one year. parents recommended a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and little money. Even though I livingfrom my parents, that was not enough to live. I had a part-time job, I could live better than I it. There is a bad aspect I couldn't concentrate on my . After working for months, I thought whether I stop working. My choice was keep . At that time, I was young I had many in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret . If I a , I would work. Some people think having a part-time job is time in their . Otherwise people part-time job than no experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. | I think that college students have a part-time jab before graduating from university. Because they didn't have any experience about a part-time job, they will be embarrassed in society. In my case when I was a fresh man, I worked Lotto Riau as a part time worker for one year. And my parents recommended me to have a part-time job before going to army. I think it was good experience for me to meet various people and got little money. Even though I got living money from my parents, that was not enough to live. But since I had a part-time job, I could live better than I didn't have it. There is a bad aspect. It means I couldn't concentrate on my study. After working for 6 months, I thought whether I stop working or not. My choice was keep it going. At that time, I was young. So I had many chance in future and I had to go to army. Now I don't regret it. If I turn a fresh man, I would work also. Some people think having a part-time job is spent time in their life. Otherwise people who would have a part-time job, they will be succeed than no having experience. If you are living in Korea, I want you to have a part-time job when you are young. |
TWN | B1_1 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 19 | 19 | 19 | Making use of connectors in the passage | Unable to understand the message of the passage | 20,570 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
JPN | A2_0 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 41 | 41 | 41 | The points are well structured | Inaccurate usage of nouns and less usage of connectors | 20,511 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
JPN | B2_0 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 61 | 61 | 61 | Managed to give reasons with supporting details | Missing word/adverb makes the whole sentence different/conflicting. | 20,490 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
THA | B1_2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 6 | 33 | 33 | 33 | Try to emphasize on the strong key points | However, the points are all over the place with improper sentence structure that disrupt the flow | 20,522 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
JPN | B1_1 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 79 | 79 | 79 | Well structured sentences and it is in logical order | few vocabulary error but still presentable | 20,459 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
TWN | B2_0 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 73 | 73 | 73 | Strong points with good supporting details | Use wrong pronouns and a little bit exaggerating in few sentence. | 20,471 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
TWN | A2_0 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 78 | 78 | 78 | Overall the passage is well structured, easy to understand and have good supporting details | Weak in punctuation. Otherwise, it's good | 20,481 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
KOR | B1_2 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 64 | 64 | 64 | Half of the passage is in logical order and well sentenced with details | The other half the passage uses very simple words/wrong words which lose the rea meaning of the sentences. | 20,450 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
JPN | A2_0 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 28 | 28 | 28 | Opening and closing statement is to argue | However the content is conflicting | 20,563 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
JPN | B2_0 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 71 | 71 | 71 | It is in logical order and easily understood by reading it | Used wrong vocabulary which changes the actual meaning | 20,460 | time job both positive and negative side. Part-time jobs can add to experience, but on the other part-time jobs only laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and complete the task well. Work parttime foster learning a desire to pursue money, env, spite, selfish and arrogan. Th the money is actually very good for students future work later when will demonstrate perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the lecture. With formulastudents can feel how the atmosphere employ and foster independen stancewhile students also become more cautious work, students can consult directly with supervisor or lecturer if there is a problem the job. Parttime job that been set by the college are expected to disrupt student learning fostering students' positive . In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. | Part time job has both a positive side and negative side for college students. Part-time jobs can add to the experience for students, but on the other side part-time jobs only add laziness students to gain knowledge in lectures and feared student can not complete the task well. Work part-time foster learning lazy mind, a desire to pursue money, envious, spiteful, selfish and arrogant. Thoughts chase the money is actually very good for the students for future work later when the students will demonstrate his perseverance in working. I think the better part-time work directly supervised by the college or the work is equated with the task of lectures. With the formula so students can feel how hard the atmosphere in employment and foster independence stance while also students also become more cautious in the work, students can also consult directly with the supervisor or lecturer of the course if there is a problem in the job. Part time job that has been set by the college are expected to not disrupt student learning and fostering students' positive thoughts. In general I support the idea of part time work for college students on condition that the job will not lead to failure in their studies. |
CHN | B1_1 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 30 | 32 | 31 | The essay seems coherent and united with the accomplishment of idea discussion in it | Many grammatical errors are committed, so they reduce the quality of the writing. | 20,664 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |
HKG | B2_0 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 30 | 32 | 31 | The essay seems coherent and united with the accomplishment of idea discussion in it | Many grammatical errors are committed, so they reduce the quality of the writing. | 20,659 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |
JPN | B1_1 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 80 | 82 | 81 | The essay is well written with good grammar and appropriate use of vocabularies. | There is almost no weakness in the essay that makes it hard to understand. | 20,700 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |
CHN | B2_0 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 80 | 84 | 82 | The essay is well written with good grammar and appropriate use of vocabularies. | There is almost no weakness in the essay that makes it hard to understand. | 20,610 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |
CHN | B1_2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 80 | 84 | 82 | The essay is well written with good grammar and appropriate use of vocabularies. | There is almost no weakness in the essay that makes it hard to understand. | 20,602 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |
ENS | ENS | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 80 | 85 | 82.5 | The essay is well written with good grammar and appropriate use of vocabularies. | There is almost no weakness in the essay that makes it hard to understand. | 20,701 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |
KOR | A2_0 | 6 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 40 | 45 | 42.5 | The essay sounds logical with the help of sequence words. | There are some typically grammatical errors made in the essay. | 20,607 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |
THA | A2_0 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 40 | 33 | 36.5 | The essay is concise and can convey the actual message of the writer. | Many grammatical errors are committed, so they reduce the quality of the writing. | 20,699 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |
TWN | B1_1 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 30 | 35 | 32.5 | The essay is concise and can convey the actual message of the writer. | Many grammatical errors are committed, so they reduce the quality of the writing. | 20,674 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |
THA | B1_1 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 6 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 40 | 38 | 39 | The essay is concise and effectively expresses the author's intended purpose. | Many grammatical errors are committed, so they reduce the quality of the writing. | 20,697 | When teenagers were high school students, they less responsibility, less , and they still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As adult, they to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take responsibility for their own . That is why college students should have parttime job. There are three reasons why they should have parttime job to learn to be dependent on parents, to be able to work, and to learn to responsibilit. First of all, by taking part time job, high school students who just college students can be independent and learn to lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking parttime job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although parttime job small job, can a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the parttime job, they can learn how to be responsible to themselves by doing their work properly, and to others the parttime job, the , managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take parttime job. | When teenagers were high school students, they have less responsibility, less self-dependency, and they are still living in their comfort zone. Therefore, as soon as they step into college life, they have stepped into adulthood as well. As an adult, they have to be independent, able to take care of themselves, and take bigger responsibility for their own life. That is why college students should have a part time job. There are three reasons why they should have a part time job; to learn to not be dependent on one's parents, to be able to work, and to learn to have their responsibility as an adult. First of all, by taking a part time job, high school students who just turned into college students can be independent and learn to not lean on their parents anymore since they will part from them later on. Second, by taking a part time job, they can learn about working and earning money. Although part time job is a small job, but it can give them a picture of how working world is and how they make a living through it so that later when they are working in a company or starting their own business, they already know how to adapt and what to do. Lastly, through the part time job, they can learn on how to be responsible to themselves, by doing their work properly, and to others who are related to the part time job, the costumers, the managers, and co-workers. That is why college students should take a part time job. |