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The packets would then be forwarded from one computer to another computer until the information arrived at its final destination computer.

The packets were now be forwarded to one computer, and the information was finally arrived at the final destination.

The packets were now be forwarded to one computer, and the information was finally arrived at the final destination.

Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The packets were then be forwarded from one computer to another computer until the information arrived at its final destination computer.

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This was an important part of a computer network.

# This was an important part in a computer networking network.

# This was an important part in a computer networking network.

Fix grammatical errors: This was important part of a computer network.

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As a result of decentralization, packet switching, unlike the telephone system, will not break down when one part of the network system is faulty since the packets can be rerouted until it arrives at their intended destination.

The decentralization of the packet-switching system will not only break down the telephone network, but it will also break down packet switching in the packet switching system.

The decentralization of the packet-switching system will not only break down the telephone network, but it will also break down packet switching in the packet switching system.

Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: As a result of decentralization, packet switching, unlike the telephone system, will not break down when one part of the network systems is faulty since the packets can be rerouted until it arrived at its intended destination.

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Although there were over 230 ARPANET sites in 1982, Usenet took less than two years to reach that number.

# Although there have been over 300 ARPAnet sites, over two years ago, the Usenet took less than a two-year to reach the number of sites.

# Although there have been over 300 ARPAnet sites, over two years ago, the Usenet took less than a two-year to reach the number of sites.

Fix errors in this text: Although there were over 230 ARPANET sites in 1982, Usenet take less than two years to reach that number.

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This resulted in hundreds of discussion groups, each discussing different subjects, which range from politics to daily life experiences.

The result of these discussions was a huge number of discussions, each with its own discussion group, which each discussed different subjects.

The result of these discussions was a huge number of discussions, each with its own discussion group, which each discussed different subjects.

Improve the grammar of this text: This resulted in hundreds of discussion groups, each discussing different subjects, which range from politics to daily life experience.

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In conclusion, it was the historical background during the era of the Cold War that prompted the US government to consider new ways of creating indestructible communication to enable the political and military leaders to communicate with each other during a nuclear attack.

The historical background of the era during the period of the Cold War, which prompted the U.S. government to contemplate new ways to create an indestructive communication system, enabled the leaders of the United States and the Soviet Union to communicate effectively during nuclear attacks.

The historical background of the era during the period of the Cold War, which prompted the U.S. government to contemplate new ways to create an indestructive communication system, enabled the leaders of the United States and the Soviet Union to communicate effectively during nuclear attacks.

Fix grammatical errors: In conclusion, it was the historical background during the era of Cold War that prompted the US government to consider new ways of creating indestructible communication to enable the political and military leaders to communicate with each other during a nuclear attack.

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Through the works of brilliant researchers, the Internet, which was limited to a few users at first, was improvised to accommodate increase electronic traffic and finally commercialized to be available to each and every individual.

The works of the brilliant researchers have been improvised, to accommodate the increase in electronic traffic, and finally, the commercialization of the Internet has been made available to everyone.

The works of the brilliant researchers have been improvised, to accommodate the increase in electronic traffic, and finally, the commercialization of the Internet has been made available to everyone.

Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Through the works of brilliant researchers, the Internet, which has limited to a few users at first, was improvised to accommodate increase electronic traffic and finally commercialize to be available to each and individual of us.

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Such cases are typical examples of how a technological invention is shaped by economic factors, in which the technology made available to the consumer was directed by earned profits of corporations instead of offering the one that benefits the consumer most.

In such cases, technological inventions are shaped by the economic factors in which they are available to consumers instead of, in this case, offering the ones that benefit consumers most.

In such cases, such technological inventions are shaped by the economic factor in which they are available to consumers, instead of being directed by corporate profits earned rather than offering the ones that benefit consumers most.

Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Such cases are typical examples of how a technological invention is shaped by economic factor, in which the technology made available to the consumer was directed by corporations' profits earned instead of offering the one that benefits consumer most.

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Therefore, it can be concluded that functionality may not be the only determining factor to the success of technology since it may not be the priority of the consumer's concern, but rather how the technology is commercialized and diffused to the public or society.

Therefore, it is concluded that the functionality of the technology may not only be determining factor for the success, but also, rather than the priority, it may be the other factor, which is the commercialization and diffusion of technology to the society.

Therefore, it is concluded that the functionality of the technology may not only be determining factor for the success, but also, rather than the priority, it may be the other way around.

Fix the grammar mistakes: Therefore, it can be concluded that functionality may not be only determining factor to the success of technology since it may not be the priority of consumer's concern, but rather how the technology is commercialized and diffused to the public or society.

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Due to the flourishing of construction industries over the years, construction industries worldwide consume resources equivalent to more than what nature is able to produce on Earth.

The construction industries have been flourishing over time, and the construction industry worldwide consumes resources equivalent of more than the nature can produce on the Earth.

The construction industries have been flourishing over time, and the construction industry worldwide consumes resources comparable to what nature can produce on the Earth.

Remove grammatical mistakes: Due to the flourishing of construction industries over the years, the construction industries worldwide consume resources equivalent to more than what the nature are able to produce on Earth.

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However, considerations should be taken into account during the design process.

The consideration should be given to the few considerations that should be considered when designing a product.

The consideration should be given to the few considerations that should be considered when designing a product.

Fix the grammar mistakes: However, few considerations should be taken into account during the design process.

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Moreover, recycling, which needs reprocessing, may not be economically feasible because it requires a facility using recycled resources to be located near the source.

The further development of recycling, which needs reprocessing, may be not economically feasible since it requires the use of a facility that is located near a source of recycled resources.

In addition, recycling, which needs to be reprocessed, may be not economically feasible due to the cost of reprocessing.

Improve the grammar of this text: Moreover, recycling which need reprocessing may not be economically feasible because it requires a facility using recycled resources to be located near the source.

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For a technology that is deliberately invented, it generally requires a much longer time frame as compared to fortuitous discoveries.

# For a technological invention, it typically requires much longer a time frame than those discoveries.

The invention of a technology deliberately invented usually requires much longer time frames than those fortuities.

Fix grammar errors: For a technology that is deliberately invented, it generally requires much a longer time frame as compared to those fortuitous discoveries.

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Much research has to be prepared so that the best solution can be found.

#Much research has been done to find a best solution for the best one.

#Much research has been done to find a best solution for the best one.

Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Much research has to be prepared so that the best solution could be found.

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In the case of the tomato harvesting machine, there are plenty of factors that need to be considered.

This is a case of a tomato harvest machine. There are lots of factors to consider.

The tomato harvest machine is a lot of factors to consider.

Update to remove grammar errors: In the case of the tomato harvesting machine, there are plenty of factors that need to be consider.

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However, in the case of serendipitous discoveries, identifying a problem or need as well as selecting the best solutions are eliminated.

The serendipitous discovery of the problem or the need for a solution is eliminated in this case.

The serendipitous discovery of the problem or the need for a solution is eliminated in this case.

Fix grammatical errors: However in the case of the serendipitous discoveries, identifying a problem or need as well as selecting the best solution are eliminated.

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In the case of deliberate technology, inventors must not restrict themselves to only one solution but expose themselves to various possible solutions.

# In the cases of deliberate technologies, inventors should not limit themselves to just one solution, but expose themselves to a variety of possible solutions

The invention must not limit itself only to one solution, but expose itself to the numerous possible solutions

Fix all grammatical errors: In the case of a deliberate technology, inventors must not restrict themselves to only one solution but exposed themselves to the various possible solutions.

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If luck is present with coincidence, the best solution will be generated in a shorter time.

#If luck is a presence with a coincidence, a best solution is generated in the shortest time.

#If luck is present with a coincidence, then the best way to generate a solution in a short time is to create a shorter solution.

Fix errors in this text: If luck is presence with coincidence, the best solution will be generated in a shorter time.

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Since fortuitous discovery often occurs while research is carried out in a totally unrelated field, scientists must be able to identify the technology that was come by accidentally.

The discovery often happens while research is carried out on a completely unrelated field. They must have the ability to identify technology that comes by accident.

The discovery often happens while research is carried out on a completely unrelated field. They must have the ability to identify technology that comes by accident.

Make the sentence grammatical: Since fortuitous discovery often occurs while research was carried out in a totally unrelated field, they must be able to identify the technology that came by accidentally.

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However, the products in the market are not updating as fast as the innovation introduced to the public.

The products in the market, however, are not being updated as rapidly as the innovations introduced by the public to the market.

The products in the market, however, are not being updated as rapidly as the innovations introduced by the public to the market.

Fix grammar errors: However, the products in market are not updating as fast as the innovation introduced to the public.

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Because of these overwhelming advantages, people expected that gas refrigerators would dominate the consumer market.

The overwhelming advantages of the gas refrigerator will make people expect that gas refrigerators will dominate the consumers' market.

The overwhelming advantages of the gas refrigerator will make people expect that the gas-powered refrigerator will dominate the consumers' market.

Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Because of these overwhelming advantages, people expected that gas refrigerator would dominate the consumer market.

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To sum up, in the generation of innovation, the development of technology is not just technologically decisive but also more socially decisive.

# To sum it up, innovation is not only technologically decisive but also more socially crucial.

# To sum it up, innovation is not only technologically decisive but also more socially crucial.

Fix all grammatical errors: To sum up, in the generation of innovation, the development of technology is not just technologically decisive, but more socially decisive.

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This process and system assist in the growing of crops in dry areas, especially during periods of inadequate rainfall.

The process and systems assist in growing crops in the dry areas, especially during the periods of insufficient rainfall.

In this process, the system assists in growing crops in the dry area, especially during the periods of insufficient rainfall.

Fix grammar in this sentence: This process and system assist in the growing of crops in dry area especially during periods of inadequate rainfall.

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Engineers in recent years have been working creatively and innovatively to properly treat and manage water.

In recent years, engineers in recent decades have been actively working creatively to properly manage water.

In recent years, engineers in recent decades have been actively working creatively to properly manage water.

Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Engineers in recent years have been working creatively and innovatively to properly treat and managed water.

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In certain countries, dried-out lands are even brought alive through water irrigation, where water is stored up somewhere and constantly transported through pipes to these lands.

The dried-up lands in certain countries are brought alive by the water irrigation process, where the water is stored up where it is constantly transported to the lands.

The dried-up lands in certain countries are brought alive by water irrigation. Where water is stored, constantly transported, and constantly pumped through pipes, these lands are actually alive.

Remove grammar mistakes: In certain countries, dried-out lands are even brought alive through water irrigation, where water are stored up somewhere and constantly transported through pipes to these lands.

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Nevertheless, both of the inventions required time and effort to create miracles in the world.

The invention of both the inventions requires time and efforts to create miraculous miracles in our world.

The invention of both the inventions requires time and efforts to create miraculous miracles in our world.

Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Nevertheless, both of the inventions require time and effort to create miracles in the world.

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In Singaporengapore, the local society and education system produces problems that hinder the usage of the engineering design process.

#Singapore, local society, and education systems produce problems that hamper the use of engineering design processes.

#Singapore, local society, and education systems produce problems that hamper the use of engineering design processes.

Grammar improvements: In singapore, the local society and education system produces problems that hinder the usage of the engineering design process.

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Whether students learn or not depends on the outcome of major examinations such as GCE 'O' and 'A' levels.

The outcome of the major examinations, such as the GCE "O" and "A" levels, depends on whether students learn or not.

The outcome of the major examinations, such as the GCE "O" and "A" levels, depends on whether students learn or not.

Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Whether students learned or not depends on the outcome of major examinations such as GCE 'O' and 'A' levels.

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These skills are critical to the two stages of the design process but are lacking in locals due to the effect of the education system.

The skills that are critical for these stages are lacking in the locals, due to a lack of education in the system.

The skills that are critical for these stages are lacking in the locals, due to a lack of education.

Fix grammaticality of the sentence: These skills are critical to the two stages of the design process, but is lacking in locals due to the effect of the education system.

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Moreover, the majority of the locals are apathetic to their surroundings.

#Moreover, the majority of locals are indifferent to the surroundings.

#Moreover, the majority of locals are indifferent to the surroundings.

Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Moreover, majority of the locals are apathetic to their surroundings.

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To be able to define a problem, the innovator must be observant enough to see the problem and be bothered to do something to improve it, hence creating an innovation.

The innovator needs to be observantly observant, and bothered to do anything to improve the problem. Hence, creating innovation.

The innovator needs to be observantly observant, and bothered to do anything to improve the problem. Hence, creating innovation.

Remove grammar mistakes: To be able to define a problem, the innovator must be observant enough to see the problem, and bothers to do something to improve it, hence creating an innovation.

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Therefore, it can be seen that the government's involvement in promoting environmentally-friendly vehicles has affected how marketable electric vehicles are.

The government's participation in promoting environmental-friendly electric vehicles affected the marketability of electric vehicles.

The government's participation in promoting the environmentally-friendliness of electric vehicles has affected the marketability of these vehicles.

Fix the grammar mistakes: Therefore, it can be seen that the government's involvement in promoting environmentally-friendly vehicles affected how marketable electric vehicles are.

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In short, there are several factors that could have shaped electric vehicles.

The factors that can have shaped electric vehicles are several.

The factors that can have shaped electric vehicles are several.

Fix grammar in the sentence: In short, there are several factors that could have shaped the electric vehicles.

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However, there is a close relationship between social factors and the technical challenges that electric vehicles face.

The social factors that affect the electric vehicle's technological challenges are the close relationship with social factors, and the technological challenges that they face.

The social factors that affect the electric vehicle's technological challenges are the same as the technical ones. However, the social factor is more important than the technical one.

Grammar improvements: However, there is a close relationship between the social factors and the technical challenges that the electric vehicles face.

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Hence, the recognition of electric vehicles by society could be affected by both social factors and challenges faced by the present technology of electric vehicle.

# Hence, recognizing electric vehicles, by society, could be influenced by both societal factors and the challenges faced by the present technological innovation of electric cars.

# Hence, recognizing electric vehicles, by society, could be influenced by both societal factors and the challenges faced by the present technological innovation of electric cars.

Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Hence, the recognition of electric vehicles by society could be affected by both social factors and challenges faced in the present technology of the electric vehicle.

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In Singapore, and other countries next to the equator, air conditioners and electric fans have greatly contributed to people's lives, and people are able to enjoy cool and refreshing air on burning hot days.

The air conditioners, electric fans, and air conditioners have greatly helped people's lives and people can enjoy cool, refreshing, and burning-hot days.

The next most important factor in people's lives is the air conditioners, electric fans, and air conditioners. Next, they are greatly contributed by people in other countries around the equator.

Update to remove grammar errors: In Singapore, and other countries next to the equator, air conditioners and electric fans have greatly contributed to people's life and people are able to enjoy cool and refreshing in burning hot days.

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The advent of the electric fan was a great success, and it was implemented around the world.

The advent of the electric fan, which was an incredible success, was a tremendous success and was implemented all over the world in the 19th century.

The advent of the electric fan, which was an incredible success, was a tremendous success and was implemented all over the world in the 19th century.

Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The advent of electric fan was a great success and it was implemented around the world.

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It cannot really cool the temperature and does not control humidity.

The temperature cannot be really cool, and it does not control the humidity.

The temperature and the humidity cannot be really cool, but they do control the temperature.

Remove grammar mistakes: It cannot really cool the temperature and do not control humidity.

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The air conditioner was so effective that despite its relatively high price, it was integrated into people's lives and installed everywhere.

The air conditioner is so effective, that despite the relatively high cost, it is integrated into people's lives, and it was installed all over.

The air conditioner is so effective, that despite the relatively high cost, it is integrated into people's lives, and it was installed all over.

Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The air conditioner was so effective that despite its relatively high price, it was integrated to people's life and installed everywhere.

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The design was initiated by people's needs, and it ultimately met people's needs.

The design was initially initiated by the needs of the people, and it ultimately met the people's need.

In the design process, people were the ones who ultimately met the needs of the people's requirements.

Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The design was initiated by people's needs, and they ultimately met people's needs.

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More developed and enhanced functions will be added to improve people's lives better and better.

# More developed, enhanced, and improved functions will add to people's lives better, and better, better.

# More developed, enhanced, and improved functions will add to people's lives better, and better, better.

Remove all grammatical errors from this text: More developed and enhanced functions will be added and improve people's life better and better.

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Without it, our society could not have progressed, nor would our lives become convenient.

The absence of it would have prevented our society from progressing and would not have been convenient for us to live in.

The absence of it would have prevented our society from progressing and would not have been convenient for us to live in.

Make the sentence grammatical: Without it, our society could not have progressed, nor would our life become convenient.

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So during the process, they encounter different obstacles, such as political issues and financial issues.

The process of the process involves different obstacles that are encountered during the entire process.

The process of the process involves different obstacles that are encountered during the whole process.

Fix the grammar mistakes: So during the process, they encounter different obstacles, such as political issues, financial issues.

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Moreover, more efforts are needed if they want to commercialize the product from their research.

The more efforts, the more the product will be commercialized.

The more efforts, the more the product will be commercialized.

Fix grammar: Moreover, more efforts are need if they want to commercialize the product from their research.

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The mismatch between low levels of technological development on the one hand and the enormous velocity of the catch-up process on the other makes companies unwilling to innovate on their own.

The mismatch between the still low technological development levels and the tremendous velocity of technological innovation makes company not willing to innovate.

The mismatch between the still low technological development levels and the enormous speed of the technological catch up process makes the company not willing to innovate.

Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The mismatch between still low levels of technological development on the one hand, and enormous velocity of the catch-up process on the other makes company unwilling to innovate on their own.

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The main aim of entrepreneurs is to bring higher profits in a shorter time to their company.

The main aim of an entrepreneur is to create higher profits for his or her company.

The main aim of an entrepreneur's main aim in bringing higher profits to his company.

Fix grammar in the sentence: Entrepreneurs' main aim is to bring higher profits in a shorter time to their company.

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Hopefully, these problems can be eliminated in the future, and the situation can become better and better.

The problems that can be solved in the future and the situation can be become better, and better, in the next few years.

The problems that can be solved in the future and the situation can be become better, and better, in the next few years.

Improve the grammar of this text: Hopefully, these problems can be eliminated in future and situation can become better and better.

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The release of information is usually done by companies that want to flaunt their superiority over other similar companies competing in the same market.

The release of the information is normally done by the companies which want to flatter themselves over the same similar companies that are competing in a similar market.

The release of the information is normally done by the companies which want to flatter themselves over the other similar similar companies.

Fix grammar in this sentence: The release of information is usually done by companies which wanted to flaunt their superiority over other similar companies competing in the same market.

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Secondly, products that emerge from both technologies can be used for a long time.

The second product that emerged from the two technologies is a long-term product.

The second product that emerged from the two technologies is a long-term product.

Fix grammar in this sentence: Second, products that emerge from both technologies can be used for a long time.

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Using the previous examples, the P-80 jet was used for close to 30 years before being replaced completely, while the HIV vaccine may be in use forever if the vaccine undergoes successful research.

# Using the preceding examples, using the previous ones, and the HIV vaccines, may be used forever if they undergo successful research,

In the past, using a P-70 jet for close-to-30-years-worth of use was used to replace the HIV-vaccine.

Fix the grammar mistakes: Using the previous examples, the P-80 jet was used for close to 30 years before being replaced completely, while the HIV vaccine may be in use forever if the vaccine undergoes successful researches.

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The main steps to consider in a good and proper housing system are affordability, durability, and safe living conditions.

This is the main step to consider when considering a good housing system. The main step is the affordability of the housing. Durability and safety are also important factors to consider.

This is the main step to consider when considering a good housing system. The main step is the affordability of the housing. Durability and safety are also important factors to consider.

Fix grammar errors: The main steps to consider in a good and proper housing system are the affordability, durability and safe living conditions.

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Hence the main solution to the problem of improper housing would be the reduction of housing costs without compromising on quality.

# Hence, the solution to this problem would be to reduce the housing cost while compromising on the quality of the housing.

# Hence, the solution to this problem would be to reduce the housing cost while compromising on the quality of the housing.

Fix grammaticality: Hence the main solution to the problem of improper housing would be the reduction of housing cost without compromising on quality.

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On being unable to obtain a proper home, shanty houses are the next and only alternative that the homeless can approach.

The homeless are the first and only option that the squatters can approach in order to obtain proper homes.

The homeless are the first and only option that the squatters can approach in order to obtain proper homes.

Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: On being unable to obtain a proper home, squatters are the next and only alternative that the homeless can approach to.

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In meeting this need, engineering design processes play an important role.

The meeting this needs is the engineering design process.

The meeting this needs is the engineering design process.

Make the sentence fluent: In meeting this need, engineering design processes takes an important role.

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As we know, the storage and transportation of hydrogen have been two major factors that restrict the wide use of hydrogen.

The storage and transportation of hydrogen has been a major factor that restricts the wide-use of hydrogen in the future.

This sentence shows that the storage of hydrogen has been a major factor that restricts the wide-use of hydrogen in the transportation sector.

Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: As we know, the storage and transport of hydrogen have been two major factors that restrict the wide use of hydrogen.

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Engineers need to find the right materials and design a suitable container for hydrogen so that it can be safely transported and stored.

This engineer needs to find the right materials for a container that can safely transport and store hydrogen.

This engineer needs to find the right materials for a container that can safely transport and store hydrogen.

Improve the grammaticality: Engineers need to find right materials and design a suitable container for hydrogen so that it can be safely transported and stored.

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In addition, deep processing of fossil fuels also needs engineering design to improve the utilization of fossil fuels.

This sentence is in addition to the grammatical errors made in the previous sentence. In addition to engineering design, the development of fossil fuel requires engineering design.

This sentence is in addition to the grammatical errors made in the previous sentence. In addition to engineering design, there are also engineering design processes that need to be followed to improve the utilization of fossils fuels.

Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In addition, deep processing of fossil fuels also needs engineering design to improve utilization of fossil fuels.

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For example, during the process of exploiting oil, the byproducts like natural gas are often burned since it is hard to collect and store.

The process of extracting oil involves the utilization of natural gas, which is often burned as a byproduct of the process.

The process of extracting oil involves the utilization of natural gas, which is often burned as a byproduct of the process.

Fix grammar errors in this sentence: For example, during the process of exploiting oil, the byproducts like natural gas are often burned since it is hard to collect and stored.

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Engineers are trying to find a superconducting material that can work at room temperature to take the place of traditional conducting materials.

# Engineers are attempting to find superconductors that can be used in room-temperature to take part in traditional conducting materials.

This engineer is trying to solve the problem of superconducting materials that can be used in room-temperature to take part in traditional conducting materials.

Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Engineers are trying to find a superconducting material that can work in room temperature to take place of traditional conducting material.

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Furthermore, energy-saving appliances designed by engineers have saved inestimable energy for the world.

# Furthermore, energy-saving appliances have saved the world inestimably energy for it.

# Furthermore, energy-saving appliances have saved the world inestimably energy for it.

Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Furthermore, the energy- saving appliances designed by engineers have saved inestimable energy for the world.

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The survival of humanity in this century is heavily dependent on the role of Engineers, and they should be prepared for potential threats and challenges.

The survival of human civilization in the 21st century depends heavily on the roles played by engineers and we are expected to prepare for potential challenges and threats.

In this century, the survival of human beings in this world is heavily reliant on the roles of Engineers, and we are expected to prepare for potential challenges and threats that may arise.

Improve the grammaticality of this text: The survival of humanity in this century is heavily dependent on the role of Engineers and we should be prepared for potential threats and challenges.

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Although a complete ban on RFID is impossible, its usage on individual tracking should be banned as it intrudes upon our privacy and compromises our security.

In spite of its complete ban, the usage of RFID should be prohibited as it infringes our privacy, and compromises the security of our privacy.

This is despite the fact that it is impossible to completely ban the use of RFID, as it is, in fact, a partial ban on the usage of individual tracking.

Fix grammatical errors: Although a complete ban on RFID is impossible, its usage on individual tracking should be banned as it intrudes our privacy and compromises our security.

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Similarly, since the disease might not manifest itself even if one is tested positive, no one should have the right to reveal the results as it is difficult to verify the exactitude of the results.

#Similarly, since there is no cure for the disease, nobody should be allowed to reveal results as they are difficult to verifiy the exactness of the results.

#Similarly, since there is no cure for the disease, nobody should be allowed to reveal results as they are difficult to verifiy the exactness of the results.

Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Similarly, since the disease might not manifest itself even if one is tested positive, no one should have the right to reveal the results as it is difficult to verify the exactitude of the result.

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In conclusion, the results of genetic testing do have big impacts on people's lives in terms of emotional impacts and genetic discrimination.

In conclusion, genetic testing has big impacts on people's lives, and the genetic discrimination that results from genetic testing is big.

In conclusion, genetic testing has big impacts on people's lives, and the genetic discrimination that results from genetic testing is big.

Fix grammaticality: In conclusion, the results of genetic testing do have big impacts of people's life in terms of emotional impacts and genetic discrimination.

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Therefore, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results, and this is also in agreement with protecting human rights.

# Therefore, individuals who request genetic testing to reveal their results should have a final say on whether to disclose the results.

# Therefore, individuals who request genetic testing to reveal their results should have a final say on whether to disclose the results.

Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Therefore, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results, and this is also in agreement of protecting human rights.

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Furthermore, it is also unfair to the insurance companies if the individual with a genetic disease decides to buy life insurance policies without revealing that they have a such a genetic disorder.

The insurance companies should also be held responsible for the unfairness of the individual who decides to buy a life insurance policy without revealing their genetic disease.

The insurance companies should also be held responsible for the unfairness of the individual who decides to buy a life insurance policy without revealing their genetic disease.

Improve the grammaticality: Furthermore, it is also unfair to the insurance companies if the individual with genetic disease decided to buy life insurance policies without revealing that they have such genetic disorder.

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This technology allows for more effective tracing of an individual through an instant identification approach.

The ability to more effectively trace an individual's genetic information through an instantaneous identification approach is a key factor in the development of this technology.

The ability to more effectively trace an individual's genetic information through an instantaneous identification approach is a key factor in the development of this technology.

Fix all grammatical errors: It allows for more effective tracing of an individual through an instant identification approach.

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The RFID wrist tags also code for information regarding the patient.

This RFID wrist tag also codes information regarding a patient.

This RFID wrist tag also codes information regarding a patient.

Improve the grammar of this text: The RFID wrist tags also codes for information regarding the patient.

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Important data such as the appropriate medication and meal requirements can be easily retrieved, thereby facilitating the job of the nurses.

The important data, such as appropriate medication and meal requirements, can easily be retrieved, thus facilitating the work of nurses.

The important data, such as appropriate medication and meal requirements, can easily be retrieved, thus facilitating the work of nurses.

Fix the grammar mistakes: Important data such as the appropriate medication, meal requirements can be easily retrieved, thereby facilitating the job of the nurses.

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RFID may revolutionize our society in the future, but at the very moment, it is still in its infant stage where its benefits have yet to warrant a widespread implementation while its disadvantages are insurmountable.

The RFID technology has been in its infancy for a while, but its benefits are still in their infancy, where its disadvantages have yet not warranted widespread implementation.

In the future, RFID technology may revolutionize society in the infancy stage, but at this moment, its benefits are still surmountable, and its drawbacks are still unabated.

Remove grammar mistakes: RFID may revolutionize our society in future but at the very moment, it is still in its infant stage where its benefits have yet to warrant a widespread implementation while its disadvantages are surmountable.

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First of all, RFID has played an important role in preventing crimes.

The first thing that RFID has done is to prevent criminals from committing crimes.

The first thing that RFID has done is to prevent criminals from committing crimes.

Fix grammar: First of all, RFID has played an important role in preventing criminal.

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From a security point of view, RFID can provide more precise and complete information on suspects or criminals, which results in a reduction in time and manpower for an investigation.

The security view of RFID is that it provides more precise information on suspect or criminals who are involved in the investigation, which reduces the time and the manpower required for the investigation.

The security view of RFID is that it provides more precise information on suspect or criminals who are involved in the investigation, which reduces the time and the manpower required for the investigation.

Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: From security view, RFID can provide more precise and complete information on suspects or criminals, which results in the reduction in time and manpower for an investigation.

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Another key application of RFID is that RFID helps to improve the healthcare sector.

The other key application of RFID is in the healthcare industry.

The other key application of RFID is in the healthcare industry.

Fix grammar: Another key application from RFID is that RFID helps to improve the healthcare sector.

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For instance, it is safer now for patients who have mental diseases if they are lost because they are being tracked all the time in the hospital under a surveillance system like RFID.

The more safe it is now, the more likely it is that a patient who has a mental loss or mental disease will be lost under surveillance in a hospital under surveillance.

The more safe it is now, the more likely it is that a patient who has a mental loss or mental disease will be lost under surveillance in a hospital under surveillance.

Improve the grammaticality: For instance, it is more safe now for patients who have mental lost or mental diseases if they are lost, because they are being tracked all the time in the hospital under the surveillance system like RFID.

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And the fact is that most people will choose safety and security between security and privacy.

#And the fact that most people would choose security and security over safety and privacy is because most of them will choose the latter.

#And the fact that most people would choose security and security over safety and privacy is because most of them will choose the latter.

Update to remove grammar errors: And the fact is that most of people will choose safety and security between security and privacy.

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To conclude, it is indisputable that the advantages of surveillance technology outweigh the negative effects.

In conclusion, it can be argued that the benefits of surveillance technologies outweigh the negatives.

# Conclusion: It is undeniable that surveillance technology has its advantages, but it also has its negative effects.

Fix grammatical errors: To conclude, it is indisputable that the advantages of surveillance technology outweigh the negative effect.

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However, as argued before, everybody's genes may be linked to their relatives' genes, so it is possible for the relatives, particularly their siblings, to inherit the same defective gene.

In conclusion, everybody may have genes that are linked to his or her relatives', so it may be possible for relatives, particularly their siblings, to inherit similar defective genes.

This is a possible way for everybody to inherit a defective gene, but it is also possible that the relatives, particularly their siblings, may inherit the exact same defective genes.

Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, as argued before, everybody genes may be linked to their relatives' genes, so it is possible for the relatives particularly their sibling to inherit the same defective gene.

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To conclude, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say as it is unfair to the medical insurance company and the person's relatives, who may also be at risk of inheriting the same genetic defects.

To conclude, individuals should not be required to seek genetic testing, as it may be unfair to medical insurance companies and their relatives who may also be at risk for inheriting genetic diseases.

To conclude, individuals should not be required to seek genetic testing, as it may be unfair to medical insurance companies and their relatives who may also be at risk for inheriting genetic diseases.

Fix errors in this text: To conclude, individual requesting for genetic testing should not have the final say as it is unfair to the medical insurance company and the person's relative who may be at also at risk of inheriting the same genetic defects.

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Since the attack on the London Underground on July 2005, surveillance technology has generated a lot of attention after it was used to track the movements of the terrorists responsible for the attack.

The attack on London's underground has generated much attention since it was used as a surveillance technology.

The attack on London's underground has generated much attention since it was used as a surveillance technology.

Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Since the attack on the London Underground on July 2005, surveillance technology has generated a lot of attention after they were used to track the movements of the terrorists responsible for the attack.

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Reports and articles have shown that the use of surveillance technology to track people can be beneficial to us, particularly in the healthcare and crime prevention sectors and in the enhancement of security.

This report and articles show that surveillance technology can be a beneficial tool in our healthcare and security sectors and enhancing security areas.

In the healthcare sector, surveillance technology has been shown to be beneficial for us, especially in the crime prevention and enhancing security areas.

Remove grammatical mistakes: Reports and articles have shown that the use of surveillance technology to track people can be beneficial to us, particularly in the healthcare and crime prevention sector and enhancing the security area.

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By that time, the patient's life would be in danger, and this would most probably bring about dire consequences such as death.

The time has come for her life to be in a danger, and this will most probably cause dire consequences, such as the death of her life.

The time has come for her life to be in a danger, and this will most probably cause dire consequences, such as the death of her life.

Fix grammar in this sentence: By that time, her life would be in danger and this would most probably bring about dire consequences such as death.

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Not only that, if indeed a crime happens, the prison guards will be able to investigate and know who the culprit is.

The sentence is not only grammatical, but also not only that it is not true, but it is also not true that the prisoners are able to know who the culprit is.

The sentence is not only grammatical, but also not only that it is not true, but it is also not true that the prisoners are able to know who the culprit is.

Make the sentence grammatical: Not only that, if indeed that a crime happened, the prison guards will be able to investigate and know who is the culprit.

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Thirdly, surveillance technology can also be used to keep track of our children and prevent kidnapping.

The third is surveillance technology, which can be used to keep watch over our children.

The third aspect of surveillance technology is that it can be used for the purpose of keeping track of children and preventing kidnaping.

Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Thirdly, surveillance technology can also be use to keep track of our children and prevent kidnapping.

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The main issue pertaining to this is that when an individual chooses not to disclose the result of the genetic testing, it is actually unfair to and has adverse impacts on both his family and his employer.

This is the main issue relating to this, which pertains to that individual choosing to not disclose the results of genetic testing. It is actually, unfair to the and has, adverse impacts, on both the family and the employer.

This is the main issue relating to this, which pertains to the fact that when individuals choose to not disclose the results of genetic testing due to the perceived unfairness of not disclosing the result, it has adverse effects on both the family and the employer.

Fix all grammatical errors: The main issue pertaining to this is that when an individual choose not to disclose the result of the genetic testing, it is actually unfair to and has adverse impacts on both his family and employer.

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The result of the genetic testing concerns parties other than the individual alone, and therefore, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say on whether or not the results should be revealed to others.

The result of a genetic test concerns parties who are not the individual itself, and thus, the individuals requesting genetic testing must not have a final say on whether or not the results of the test should be disclosed to other parties.

The result of a genetic test concerns parties who are not the individual itself, and thus, the individuals requesting genetic testing must not have a final say on whether or not the results of the test should be disclosed to other parties.

Fix grammatical errors: The result of the genetic testing concerns parties other than the individual alone, and therefore, the individual requesting for genetic testing should not have the final say to whether the results should be revealed to others.

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Firstly, when an individual is tested to be positive for a genetic disorder, he would be reluctant to share the result with others, even his closest kin.

The first instance of an individual being tested for a genetic disorder is when he or she is tested for the genetic disorder. He or she will be hesitant to share his or her result with other kin, even those closest to him or her.

The first instance of an individual being tested for a genetic disorder is when he or she is tested for the genetic disorder. He or she will be hesitant to share his or her result with other people, even those closest to him or her.

Improve the grammaticality of this text: Firstly, often, when an individual is tested to be positive for genetic disorder, he will be reluctant to share the result with others, even the closest kin.

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One reason for revealing the result to family members is that the result is not only applicable to the individual but also to his family members, as they may also have inherited the disease.

The one reason that the results of the experiment are not only relevant for the individual, but also for others, is that it is applicable to all family members.

The one reason that the results of the experiment are not only relevant for the individual, but also for others, is that it is applicable to all family members.

Fix grammar: One reason for revealing the result to the family members is that the result is not only applicable to the individual but also to other family members, as they may also have inherited the diseases.

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However, even though the individual may have the responsibility to inform others about the possibility of them inheriting the genes, he should have the right to decide whether or not to tell.

# Even though an individual has the responsibility for informing others about his or her genetic potential, one must have the ability to make a decision whether to inform others about it.

# Even though an individual may be responsible for informing the others of the possibility that they may inherit the genes from their parents, one must have a right to make the decision whether to inform.

Make the sentence fluent: Even though the individual may have the responsibility to inform the others about the possibility of them inheriting the genes, one should have the right to decide whether to tell.

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Moreover, the test result may be faulty, and some people carrying the gene never develop the disease.

#Moreover, a test result could be faulty, and some may never have developed the disease,

#Moreover, a test result could be faulty, and some may never have developed the disease,

Fix grammatical errors: Moreover, the test result may be faulty and some people carrying the gene may never develop the disease.

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Furthermore, the testing only gives the percentage and not the definitive results.

#Furthermore, the test only gives a percentage, but not a definitive result.

#Furthermore, the test only gives a percentage, but not a definitive result.

Remove grammar mistakes: Furthermore, the testing only gives the percentage but not the definitive results.

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However, there are also several problems arising from the use of RFID.

The use of radio-frequency identification (RFID) technology has also been attributed to several problems.

The use of radio frequency identification (RFID) has been attributed to several problems, such as the fact that it can be used to track people, and it can also be used for surveillance purposes.

Fix all grammatical errors: However, there are also several problems attributed from the use of RFID.

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Most concerns revolve around the fact that RFID invades one's privacy and violates human rights when it is used for tracking people.

The most concerns revolving around RFID are that it infringes on human rights and violates the privacy of one's own personal information.

The most concerns revolving around RFID are that it infringes on human rights and violates the privacy of one's own personal information.

Fix grammaticality: Most concerns revolve around the fact that RFID invades one's privacy and violates human rights when they are used for tracking people.

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Companies that specialize in RFID tags may pass the information obtained from the RFID tags to any buyer if the government does not intervene or control such access.

The companies which specialize in RFID tagging may pass on the information that is obtained from an RFID tag to anyone who does not have a government control.

The companies which specialize in RFID tagging may pass on the information that is obtained from an RFID tag to anyone who does not have a government control.

Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Companies which specialise in RFID tags may pass the information obtained from the RFID tags to any buyer if government does not intervene or control.

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In conclusion, RFID tracking should not be banned as it does not infringe on the privacy of people and gives advantages in many aspects of human life.

The RFID tracking system should not have been banned, but it should be implemented as it offers advantages in human lives.

The RFID tracking system should be not banned, but it should be limited to certain aspects of human life, such as privacy and security.

Fix grammaticality of the sentence: In conclusion, RFID tracking should not be banned as it does not inflict the privacy of people and gives advantages in many aspects in human life.

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As genetic diseases can be inherited among family members, anxiety and fear of inheriting the genetic diseases that the individual has been diagnosed with will be created.

In addition, genetic diseases may be inherited by family members. As a result, the individual will feel anxious and fear inheriting genetic diseases.

In addition, genetic diseases may be inherited by family members. As a result, the individual will feel anxious and fear inheriting genetic diseases.

Fix all grammatical errors: As genetic diseases can be inherited among family members, anxiety and fear of inheriting the genetic diseases that the individual has been diagnosed will be created.

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However, one should not forget that once the genetic result of the individual is disclosed, it might be difficult for the individual to integrate into society as he may be discriminated against.

The genetic results of an individual may be disclosed, but it is difficult to integrate them into society as the individual might be discriminated against.

The genetic results of an individual may be disclosed, but it is difficult to integrate them into society as the individual might be discriminated against.

Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, one should not forget that once the genetic result of the individual is disclosed, it might be difficult for the individual to integrate into the society as they may be discriminated.

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Hence, the individual should bear in mind the impacts that may arise and decide if he should reveal such results.

The individual should be aware of the impacts of such results and decide whether or not to reveal them.

# Hence, it is the individual who should bear the impacts of these results, and decide whether they should disclose them.

Fix all grammatical errors: Hence, the individual should bear in mind the impacts that may arise and decide if they should reveal such results.

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Depending on the seriousness of the disease, the individual decides whether or not to reveal his diagnosis.

# Depending on whether the disease is serious or not, the person decides whether or not to reveal it.

In contrast, depending on the severity of the illness, an individual may decide whether or not to disclose his diagnosis to others.

Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Depending on the seriousness of the disease, the individual decides whether to reveal his diagnosis.

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Moreover, forcing the individual to publicize his result could bring about a new caste system where people are grouped according to their genomes.

#Moreover, forcing individuals to publicly reveal their results will result in a new system of caste, where people will be grouped in the genome according to their genetic makeup.

The further that the individual is forced to reveal his result, the more likely he will be to group according to his genome.

Remove grammatical mistakes: Moreover, forcing the individual to publicize his result will bring about a new caste system where people are grouped according to the genome.

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In conclusion, due to the serious impact on one's life, we should let the individual decide whether or not to reveal genetic results.

The serious impact of genetic testing on one's own life should be let to the individual.

The serious impact of genetic testing on one's own life should be allowed to the individual.

Fix errors in this text: In conclusion, due to the serious impact in one's life, we should let the individual to decide his revealing genetic results.