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 ## About
 
-This is a sequal to my previous model MikuFactoryXL, in my opinion it is better in everyway. Much less blurry, better line art, better hands, more creativity, better details etc. Is also has a different art style however, which I prefer more. It was created by merging MikuFactoryXL and AltMikuFactoryXL
+This is a sequel to my previous model, MikuFactoryXL, and in my view, surpasses it in almost every aspect. E.g. sharper visuals, cleaner line art, improved hand rendering, enhanced "creativity", and finer details. It has a distinct art style I personally favor, achieved through merging MikuFactoryXL and AltMikuFactoryXL.